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by L.G.Werribold
Wed Jan 25, 2012 8:48 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: The Were-Wolf's Curse
Replies: 6
Views: 677

Re: The Were-Wolf's Curse

I appreciate your constructive comments.
Thank you.
by L.G.Werribold
Tue Jan 24, 2012 7:51 pm
Forum: Poetry Exercises
Topic: Small stones: an exercise for January
Replies: 73
Views: 22455

Re: Small stones: an exercise for January

Antcliff wrote: No finch on my rowan;
no frill-flurrying to welcome spring;
nor softly sing.

That wicked finch in the tree,
To forsake you, and flaunt with me!
by L.G.Werribold
Tue Jan 24, 2012 4:04 pm
Forum: Poetry Exercises
Topic: Small stones: an exercise for January
Replies: 73
Views: 22455

Re: Small stones: an exercise for January

Antcliff wrote:I want to build a cross betweeen
a first world war tank and riverboat
and move, slowly, around the island.
The pace would fit today.
Sometimes we need to slow down... your idea sounds ideal.
by L.G.Werribold
Tue Jan 24, 2012 4:02 pm
Forum: Poetry Exercises
Topic: Small stones: an exercise for January
Replies: 73
Views: 22455

Re: Small stones: an exercise for January

Bullfinch on a rowan branch,
Peach and pink preened puffball.
Black-capped beak, crush scarlet berries,
If I blink, I'll miss it all.
by L.G.Werribold
Tue Jan 24, 2012 1:05 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: The Were-Wolf's Curse
Replies: 6
Views: 677

The Were-Wolf's Curse

The Were-Wolf’s Curse High upon a lonely tor, A man, in frantic haste. To home, to hide behind the door, His soul is being chased. Too late, he stumbles to the ground, The darkness closes in. Terror shrieks a deathly sound, Pleasured by outrageous sin. Then the night is silent, The bite, the blood, ...
by L.G.Werribold
Tue Jan 24, 2012 1:01 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: You played me
Replies: 8
Views: 760

Re: You played me

I love poetry that creates a strong mood within me. I felt the sensuality of that piano (or keyboard) metaphor.
by L.G.Werribold
Tue Jan 24, 2012 12:52 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Fairy Nature - version 2 (edit)
Replies: 6
Views: 672

Re: Fairy Nature - version 2 (edit)

Reminds me of childhood days kicking through the autumn fallen leaves along a woodland path. It's simple and light and bowls you along.