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by Liliaea
Mon Jan 06, 2020 6:39 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Promise
Replies: 2
Views: 376

Promise

You break me. Like the promises that have lured me in, for years. I have followed. Them, like we were on the treasure hunt of the century. Sweet words buried. Only just outside my reaching, always. Waiting, longing, hoping. As they, slowly but surely. All turned sour. Providing their foundation wit...
by Liliaea
Sun Jan 05, 2020 11:48 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: We are all human
Replies: 5
Views: 865

Re: We are all human

Hi Lil, Welcome to the forum. Where are you from? This poem is very simply set out and appealing. I like it’s format and the message it conveys. My only query is hearts getting sold. Doesn’t quite fit the poem. I like the image however the poem does not seem to be going in this direction. The poem ...
by Liliaea
Sat Jan 04, 2020 6:14 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: We are all human
Replies: 5
Views: 865

We are all human

We Are all human Bodies of water Dreams of gold We Are all human Minds like fire Hearts get sold We Are all human Breathing in air Crispy and cold We Are all human Spirits of earth All grow old *So, I'm new here and English isn't my first language so I'm sorry if I make any spelling mistakes along ...
by Liliaea
Sat Jan 04, 2020 6:09 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Our Garden
Replies: 8
Views: 1075

Re: Our Garden

It's almost like I'm reading the lines grow into a garden of poetry. It's like a spell.
by Liliaea
Sat Jan 04, 2020 6:04 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Solace
Replies: 7
Views: 663

Re: Solace

Hi,
I'm new as well and English also isn't my first language so I get your insecurities there. But I think you did a great job and I'm excited to see what's coming from you!