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by Franklinsun
Mon May 04, 2020 7:26 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
Topic: Encounter.
Replies: 9
Views: 587

Re: Encounter.

Hello, Tony. Normally I wouldn't ask this sort of thing, but since there's already been some back and forth about the edits of this poem being variations rather than strictly linear versions, I thought I'd ask. I feel like the poem marked revision is the best version out of the three, and I have som...
by Franklinsun
Mon May 04, 2020 7:20 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
Topic: Bouquet Garni (Was April)
Replies: 10
Views: 556

Re: April

Hello! Hope you’re well. First off I enjoyed many of the lines and images. “Trace her future in ash/or in the line of smoke/striking out into stillness’ is gorgeous. The three layers of the poem contrast strikingly too. The fantastical layer of sacrifice with its offerings, pulsating pyres, and prop...