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Hello, Tony. Normally I wouldn't ask this sort of thing, but since there's already been some back and forth about the edits of this poem being variations rather than strictly linear versions, I thought I'd ask. I feel like the poem marked revision is the best version out of the three, and I have som...
- Mon May 04, 2020 7:20 am
- Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
- Topic: Bouquet Garni (Was April)
- Replies: 10
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Hello! Hope you’re well. First off I enjoyed many of the lines and images. “Trace her future in ash/or in the line of smoke/striking out into stillness’ is gorgeous. The three layers of the poem contrast strikingly too. The fantastical layer of sacrifice with its offerings, pulsating pyres, and prop...