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by BenJohnson
Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:04 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
Topic: Stealth
Replies: 6
Views: 502

Re: Stealth

I must agree the images that come to mind reading this for me are all of a plane (maybe stealth bomber) out over Iraq or Afghanistan. If that is the intended image then it is nicely done. The main niggle for me in the capitalisation of the first letter in each line (with the exception of one). I kno...
by BenJohnson
Mon Dec 22, 2008 7:56 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
Topic: A Kind of Loving
Replies: 26
Views: 3226

Re: A Kind of Loving

Having grown up on Ivor the Engine, Noggin the Nog, etc this poem worked so well for me. may the summons come from Noggin in that wool warm, full warm voice. When my time comes that is just the way I want to go. I know exactly what you mean by the wool warm voice. As mentioned earlier the one line w...
by BenJohnson
Mon Dec 22, 2008 7:51 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
Topic: Like This - Edited
Replies: 8
Views: 709

Re: Like This

Doh! Must read the forum rules first.
*Scurries off to comment on other poems* :D
by BenJohnson
Mon Dec 22, 2008 7:31 pm
Forum: Hello, Good Evening and Welcome
Topic: Another Hello
Replies: 12
Views: 1683

Re: Another Hello

Cheers David, I don't suppose there is any cheesecake anywhere to go with it?
by BenJohnson
Mon Dec 22, 2008 7:26 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Experienced)
Topic: Like This - Edited
Replies: 8
Views: 709

Like This - Edited

Version 2 My God, why are things done like this? Why did you send your son like this? I floated on buoyant belief, now each day weighs a ton like this. The crowds chase the unbeliever, amazed how he can run like this. I pull the threads of creation and my world comes undone; like this. Shangdi, Yahw...
by BenJohnson
Mon Dec 22, 2008 6:35 pm
Forum: Hello, Good Evening and Welcome
Topic: Another Hello
Replies: 12
Views: 1683

Another Hello

Hello everyone

I am of course new here, I registered a while back but haven't said hello yet. I have been writing for several years, but since I want to progress more than I can in isolation I have joined the forum to share and learn fro other poets.