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by Pauline
Thu Oct 29, 2009 8:07 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: My truth
Replies: 6
Views: 469

Re: The truth

Thank you guys, for the feedback. I'm really chuffed you took the time to review my work. I value all points made, and I will certainly take them on board. Sorry I didn't reply straight away, but to be honest, after reading lots of postings, yours included, I am feeling a little mmm not sure what to...
by Pauline
Thu Oct 29, 2009 10:40 am
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: My truth
Replies: 6
Views: 469

My truth

My eyes are wide open, but I still did'nt see they had taken away my liberty. I thought I was free, had the freedom of choice, but I've limited options limited voice. Like a dog on a leash I'm not free to roam, they just reel me in, I'm staying at home. Caught in a trap working forty plus hours for ...
by Pauline
Wed Oct 28, 2009 11:23 pm
Forum: Hello, Good Evening and Welcome
Topic: Hello
Replies: 3
Views: 904

Hello

Hello, My name is Pauline. I have only started writing poety about six months ago, so I am very new to this game. I dont know if I'm any good at it, but hey, I'm enjoying myself. Is'nt that what its all about. I'm not very good at spelling, or gramar. I just write what i'm feeling, and hopefully you...
by Pauline
Wed Oct 28, 2009 10:31 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Enlightenment
Replies: 6
Views: 507

Re: ENLIGHTENMENT

Hi Ros, sorry. I just got a bit carried away. I have been reading through lots of postings, and I am really enjoying seeing the different ways people write. I am new to this game, and I just wanted to see what other people thought about what I was writing. Selfish, I know< but I am so excited to be ...
by Pauline
Wed Oct 28, 2009 9:28 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: A mothers love
Replies: 5
Views: 421

A mothers love

A mother’s love can't be bought. You can't pretend,you can't be taught. It’s simply there,it’s so intense. A bond so strong,a love immense. You can't describe the love you feel. It takes your breath,it seems surreal. It never fades.never alters, It simply grows,never falters. However many kids you b...
by Pauline
Wed Oct 28, 2009 8:13 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Enlightenment
Replies: 6
Views: 507

Enlightenment

Step out from the shadows.

Cast off your shackles.

Liberate yourself from the slavery of this controlled society.

Exhilarate in the freedom of now.

Every second is the ultimate of life.

Gain strength from the power of the universe.

You are the universe.
by Pauline
Wed Oct 28, 2009 5:02 pm
Forum: Post-a-Poem (Beginners)
Topic: Mad Billy Brown
Replies: 7
Views: 680

Re: Mad Billy Brown

I REALLY ENJOYED THIS POEM. IT MADE ME LAUGH. REMINDED ME OF MY BROTHER :D